ornament 2!

image: ornament3

bit more finished look in the pic !
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yeah the "stars" dont really fit with the rest of the sky.
looks rly nice :) agrre about the stars tho
fixed the stars, looks bit better now.
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that grass reminds me too much of radar with drawfoliage 1
good question, could just replace it with some glowish white.
please,
just,
stop.
scary shit :(
Ok, if u don't mind, I'm gonna give u some tips ;) (if u mind, just pm me, and ill delete this comment).

1st of all, try using colors together that fit (you could for example use some photo filters or gradient maps).

Try making more natural shapes, because you really see the pentool effect :)

The sky is really bad, but I guess you found that out yourself. Just try taking some nice brushes, and smudge them with some other nice brushes. Use some burn and dodge, some brush erasing, that shizz, and create yourself a nice sky with clouds or space or w/e.

Also, the placement of the objects is rather random, there isn't really a focus. Try using several techniques like color fading, depth of field, blurring, sharpening, burning, dodging, and all that shizz to create an effect of depth and with that a focus.

The grass is too big and looks copied, try making small nuances with a small chalk/splatter smudge brush (use the brush options ofc ;))

Also, NEVER use lens-flare in these type of works, it really ruins the whole work imo ^^

Well, I guess that's enough whining for now.

If you still need help you can always contact me ;)
ye thanks for the tips, most of these I kinda knew already but didn't want to spend that much time with this one, not so random ornament is in my profile, if you didnt check it yet. and about the lens flare, don't know what I was thinking about.

btw, I'm not trying to make it as realistic looking as possible, I kinda like the sky as it is now, it could be better yeah, but it's not that bad either.
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I wasn't talking about making the sky realistic, but this just (sorry to use the word, but dno another one) looks really amaturistic. I mean, spice it up a bit, give it depth, give it a feeling, change the colors, etc...
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I > u izitime though
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you still suck though
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explain

wait, why am I even responding, this is crossfire - a retard community, you prolly don't know shit and are just bitchin at me w/o reason
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nah i saw your 'art' in your profile one time and it was shitty but you act like you're good at art or whatever you call random photoshop stuff
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You mean give it some feeling like water = movement = friction? Your own "art" is one big Photoshop cliché, so you might want to be more careful who you're calling amateuristic.
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Luckily I hear it from the pro himself ;)
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brush brush brush .. if you dont make them yourself and over use them its not your own creation anymore.

Same goes for the filters, experienced designers never use any
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Who said he shouldn't use his own brushes?
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like you, him or any one else who design for their own pleasure make their own brushs ;)

doubt you even know how tomake one :)

no offence too, i just find that funny
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AHAHAHAHA ok at first I didn't care about your lowzy comments, but now I'm offended. Making own brushes is izibash, and in case you wondered, I'm one of the better designers around, I actually know my shizz. You show some of your works b4 bitching @ me, retard.
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You're 17, you're a student and you're not one of the better designers around.
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yes I am :)
you're just bitchin @ me coz I busted yo scammin skillz
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Who did I scam?
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Tell me more I can't remember.
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QuoteI'm one of the better designers around


ROFL, just ROFL.

you proven that you have ABSOLUTLY NOCLUE about the subject.

didnt know someone _that_ stupid could exist.

thanks for making my day
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I actually kinda lol'd @ you xD
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no but tell, do you seriously call youself a 'designer' ? Coudl someone that adivce to use filters can call himself a 'designer' ? im sorry but the first thing i'hv learnt when i used to waste some time on photoshop was 'do not use filters nor someone else's brush' ..

but looking at you, which seems to really believe hes a 'designer' i could be wrong, all those guys working in many designing company and earning their food each months by using design soft could have been all wrong, after all you're 'spree, the designer' ...

no seriously, stop it.
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I watched your ftp @ photoshop part, and I nearly pissed my lolpants, so I'll stop replying to you now, waste of time, you dno shit ;)
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rofl the difference between you and me is that im not calling me a 'designer' and actually evrything i did on photoshop was for great and very well known company who pay very well ;)

but maybe we could start talking about coding-wise ? im sure that with your dreamweaver you are a amazing coder, arent you ?!
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I told you i'd stop replying on u, but this 1 last message I'll send u, that's it.

YOU SUCK
YOU STINK
YOU SMELL
YOU KNOW NOTHING
YOU'RE A RETARD
etc etc...

btw, I suck @ coding, don't know anything of it :)
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oh too bad :[ though you could have teachd me how to make such amazing and uber clouded supah manga's sign like in your old profile ! that was sooo amazing !

=DDDDDDDD
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You are not one of the better around. Btw, i wouldn't use any of your "wallpapers" on deviant, even if i had a gun pointed at my head.
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those aren't wallpapers, but fractals, learn ur shizz ;)
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Same shit, different name. If you claim you got skils, i suggest you look on the top favorites in each category.
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wow, be carefull, he will teach you how to use cloud's filter !
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AHAHAHAHAHA nearly pissed my lolpants :'D
why is there sunlight coming trough the clouds when there's a moon so clearly visible?
it's more like outer space or revontuli! but yeah, like I said, I didn't want to make it look that realistic.
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It's like the northern light!
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I likey!
Btw nice list of finnish ET-players who you have met. :) Where did you meet Finlandjiitee?
assembly ´05 I think, he's prolly the onlyone on the list which i'm not sure if I've met him or not, I remember seeing him though, could be wrong tho..
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He was at 05 assembly with Finlandcreator and FinlandBiitti. ^^
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ok, then I've seen him.
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ihan hieno kuva kunha parannat vähä tähtiä & ruohoa
looks good

but its not very different to the last one
yeah it's from the same concept and tbh, it is pretty different when thinking of details :p
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fucking ugly :o
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