it's clear you know how to use the tools to make the movie but god.. you lack creativity. you just copy other people and you did a bad job with it, random popups saying grenade and nice shot -well no shit sherlock that it's a grenade, I'd rather see the frag and who gets fragged not a message saying GRENADE, try to find a balance between frags and pointless popups. They do look nice when their placed right and try to find original music that hasn't been used and when used try not to copy the same editing style with the song.
I fully agree with you, thanks for saying it that clearly! I wouldn't have the courage to say it that friendly as I'm pretty badly pissed off of people who support this kind of clips/movies
Don't like this one. I think you lost the meaning of 'fragmovie' with this video
Also you just totally copied fredd and used exacly the same effects that you used in your previous movies so i don't see any creativity from you in this clip
some good effects mixed in with some poor ones. text lighting needs some work imo on some of the bits - looked very out of place. Very over edited for my tastes - maybe look into how eye tracking works in terms of movement and targeted views, would probably get a better effect doing less and not as jerky (I know it was with the song, but that style is very overdone - and imo was never that good)
i really liked 0:29, maybe would have been better with some other gun without a silencer tho.
anyways nice editing, but you rely too much on the text effects. also i thought the footage was slowmo'd a bit too much. the trick to making things like this feel good to the viewer is that you flow the frags with the speed of the music really really well, like what was done with the first frag.
also don't listen to the people saying you copied me or w/e, songs get reused all the time. keep making movies :)
(and maybe change up the colors of the twitch effects, whenever i see rgb distortion these days it just kinda feels like it's been done a thousand times)
Thank you for your opinion!
As for the text effects - well, that's what I'm most passionate about as an amateur motion graphic designer. I love typography and I think it'd be really hard for me to cool my jets in this area. The slowmo's and the flow - well, that's something that remains a mistery for me and only am I starting to get what it's all about. Thanks again on these tips, specially ones regarding the flow as it's the thing I'm most insecure about: )
it's clear you know how to use the tools to make the movie but god.. you lack creativity. you just copy other people and you did a bad job with it, random popups saying grenade and nice shot -well no shit sherlock that it's a grenade, I'd rather see the frag and who gets fragged not a message saying GRENADE, try to find a balance between frags and pointless popups. They do look nice when their placed right and try to find original music that hasn't been used and when used try not to copy the same editing style with the song.
good luck with future projects
Also you just totally copied fredd and used exacly the same effects that you used in your previous movies so i don't see any creativity from you in this clip
Ofc your editing skills are pretty amazin, peace
anyways nice editing, but you rely too much on the text effects. also i thought the footage was slowmo'd a bit too much. the trick to making things like this feel good to the viewer is that you flow the frags with the speed of the music really really well, like what was done with the first frag.
also don't listen to the people saying you copied me or w/e, songs get reused all the time. keep making movies :)
(and maybe change up the colors of the twitch effects, whenever i see rgb distortion these days it just kinda feels like it's been done a thousand times)
As for the text effects - well, that's what I'm most passionate about as an amateur motion graphic designer. I love typography and I think it'd be really hard for me to cool my jets in this area. The slowmo's and the flow - well, that's something that remains a mistery for me and only am I starting to get what it's all about. Thanks again on these tips, specially ones regarding the flow as it's the thing I'm most insecure about: )