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My second movie, starring 
Krypton. The frags are not high skill, but i principaly worked on the editing to make something a little bit different.
ThxP3T4RD & evL for the ftp.
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Krypton. The frags are not high skill, but i principaly worked on the editing to make something a little bit different. Thx
P3T4RD & evL for the ftp.Primary : (ovh)
Mirror 2 : (stream - own3d)
Mirror 3 : (free)
Mirror 4 : (free 2)
Mirrors for this?
The config was maybe too similar to Max Chapter 3 and there was definitely too much glow at some points overrunning the fragpopups completely. Hitsounds felt a bit strange at times when the guy was giving bodyshots only, but since they were used constantly throughout the movie.. guess it was better this way.
Not much else to say.. amazing work on editing part, great camming, music choices fit well in and so on.. and you even managed to get the aspect ratio straight, which seems to be so rare nowadays!
Oh, and that pic reminds me so much of Lamattitude! :P
Edit: and yeah, some scenes were cut out a bit too fast.
THis has to be one of the best ET movies I've seen in some time. It certainly wasn't the best but I can see alot of time has been put into this movie. Some cams were a bit unnecessary, content was ok, I liked the quality and the effects plus the music used was chosen well. What's important though is that I enjoyed it and I'm sure others did too!
Really liked the nade effect at 8:09
terrible aim
Looking forward for a new project from you ;)
there were some good ideas and effects, nice editing. although it was kinda ruined by the panning / zooming.. eugh. i personally didn't like most of the cams either.. they could of been smoother. music was cool, liked some songs and didnt like some. a tip though, use higher source fps so you can use smooth slowmotion.. (and thus sync more).
looking forward to your next movie.
anyway thx for the comment :)
isnt mentioned in the outro
Some cams are nice - nade follow cams etc, but most are too chaotic to even make sense of them.
Witch!
NICE
[e] nice edit,quali, looked abit choppy tho
+ the inside bomb effect :D
+ the crmbz like colors
- weird use of hitsounds ;p
-/+ frags weren't vs EC SKILLORZ, but still nice
9/10
would be even a bit better if only his own frags wouldve been shown ;]
gj
PS: oh you can't do more than one kill in bs damn :(
90% wtf just open your eyes plz
edit: and i say i'm not high do you understand that?
gOod jOb!
Some good points.
- Quality was decent. Too much glow at some maps though (karsiah).
- Intro and outro were well edited and original.
- Some great editing and sync. But with these songs, the sync could've been so much better.
- Nice cams but make them a little more smoother.
Some bad points.
- Some frags were nice but most were against random clans who hardly shoot back.
- Helmsdeep?
- Didn't see much point in the dynamite machinima.
- Slow-mo looked choppy.
It's a pretty good movie. I hope to see some more soon.
hint to the player: you get more damage if you shoot enemys' heads
(+) Pretty nice intro / outro
(+) very funky funky effects
(+) 3d used for some other effects
(+) creativity, quality, editing
(+) new talent moviemaker !
(-) frags : only bodyshot on the beginning, a lot of backrape, low hp opponents
(-) random opponents (except lio)
(-) music sync
(-) shitty hitsounds all the movie long ...
overall : 8/10 (10,10,4,8)
Looked choppy throughout the movie. Some motion blur might've saved it.
+ A few nice ideas
+ A few cams
- Looked too much like mAx chapter 3
- A few things copied straight from Winghaven's OOTW2
- I don't think this was an original movie
-- Popups, just use the default ones.
---- Cidelcorp Productions intro - coulnd't have been uglirer, except the text, which was halfway decent.
Absolutely a decent movie but certainly not a keeper :-(
6½/10
editing excellent, cfg aussi etc, rien a critiquer!
maybe a project of some highskiller's demos and you could make a movie of the year, really I saw a lot of potential in you!
Best movie effortwise for at least 6 months.
fucking nice.
backrape & bodyshot.
tu ne vois que le négatif
other than that i dont find it anything special. the color range is somewhat similar to the colors in which cars from audi are available. slow motion wasnt done right. the body shot hitsounds in the scenes make you wonder if they were turn on too mock the player. the quality isnt anything special which it should be at 40mb/min. i think the popup text is ugly (why didnt you use the same font as you did for center text?).
not a bad try, but it seems kinda sloppy. i think you can do a lot better on your next project
perhabs it's nothing special but it's still good
What do you mean?
+ Musics
+ Creativity
+ Cams
- Sync
- Frags
- Hitsounds
Pro moviemaker but player could have been better.
some ae effects attempts mostly failed or looked too obvious (its good you tried tho)
colors look a bit washed for me, that browntone gets boring after a while, also, im not a big fan of glow or other type of diffusion
some frags were pretty ok, but its not the right way to put the hitsound where the player hits all bodies, you have to try to make video look like he shot hs only, not the opposite :D
outro looked nice, shame you didnt get that box idea into the end, with contact n stuff
you have some moviemaknig potential, nice that you tried to make something different, but i definately wont signup under the "great movie" comments- your movies need you to have more experience until you make something really good. fortunately for you its the matter of experimenting with stuff, not learning it.
i voted 8/7/4/4 and i hope its quite explained above
Your aiming made me feel nauseous.
10 / 10 / 10 / 10, Well Done!
colors - well, i like max chapter 3 style, but glow ruined everything, really too much of it
hitsounds - quite good, i like "hitsounds" movies even if they are not hs only (better then no hitsounds at all like u did it in Lorraine movie which was for me really good too)
effects - movie would look better without those random effects like that in 5:10 (maybe some more skills and experiences in AE would fix it :) )
motion blur - i didnt noticed any signs of that... and slow motions looked weird to me too
popups - use same font in popus and "You killed..." text next time, and some popus were absolutely different from those u r using ingame, thats big minus for that too
Overall: really nice movie against mostly unknown players (dont know range of skills, maybe low+ to med (except for TAG)), but with nice frags and with a lot of ideas, even if i wrote negative criticism I think this movie is going to be one of the best in year 2008 (in top 10 for me)
But copying ideas from other movies such as Out of the way 2, mAx chapter 3 and Fragarea Fusion... is just lame. Like in this case.
ftw=for the win
btw love the dyno scene
amazing dyno shit =P
too much shit.
Liked some shit.
nothing here is new no new ideas nothing its dont even an avrage movie its just a
copy movie of max's movies its look like max's movies style its have almost the same colors
same white sky ( i dont even remember the effect) everything here looks so overused realy when i saw ppls rating this movie as 8\10 i said "lets check it out" but this is realy
lame usualy i dont talk like an inmature person and say "this is bad " but the new moviemakers should know that in order to make a good movie they need to do smth new or at least smth that dont look like another movies cuz copy's never works u didnt take evern an tips from his movie or being influenced u just copy it only max can do this shits try to develop your own style plz
at least the music was ok and the into\outro
max > obama
klejf > the rest of poland jewish community
next movie make it of an higher skilled player.
was geting seasick of some frags :x
very nice editing phaloid i love u
+ Nice quality,
+ Enjoyable effects,
+ Amazing work to sync the hitsounds,
+ Attractive cams,
+ Some frags,
+ Intro/Outro.
- Frags could have been better synced with the music,
- The majority of the frags,
- While watching, I _sometimes_ had the feeling of warp/lags (maybe it was Krypton ? / With how many fps did you record ?).
-> Voted 7/8/5/9
Once again, gj !