new newschool "dubstep" track
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11 Nov 2011, 16:00
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http://soundcloud.com/crzisonfire/showdown
The first Track "Showdown" from my upcoming EP " DROP THE BASS AS FAST AS YOU CAN DROP YOUR PANTS"
It's freedownloadable and i'd like to get some feedback
Thx in advance :)
and a preview from my second track:
http://soundcloud.com/crzisonfire/im-the-only-one-preview
http://soundcloud.com/logam/your-mom-makes-dubstep
no srsly, listen to this track and you'll understand why your track sucks
edit: ok i'll try to make more constructive feedback
1st song: first of all, your bass sounds still too much like random guy experimenting with fruity loops if you know what i mean. try to differ your song a bit more too & try to fill up more gaps with small sounds
2nd song: vocals are pretty good made but after the drop your drum pattern is somewhat broken to me, ofcourse this is your own decision but to me it doesn't sound so danceable.
ps: if you want some inspiration because every dubstep track sounds the same nowadays and same build up etc... try listen to more oldskool dubstep such as mala, coki, loefah, old skream & benga, tunnidge, lost & hatcha, etc.. those tunes are deeper in style and have more melody. like this tune: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8g1GGxzwnE
have a nice day sir
i have seen mala live so yeah! :)
thx for the feedback, but compared to the stuff i did like before 1 year it's awesome. i m still doing this stuff to grow and to get better! and yes your right with those small sounds!
thanks for the time!
btw check the preview from my second track
yeah obv you'll get better and better
i did, and i like your second track better
following you on soundcloud now
im also trying to make some tunes, but i won't post anything yet untill im happy with what i make etc :) can still take months :D