House music (Making it)
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29 Nov 2012, 20:57
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Hey crossfire, sup? Anyway I started making music this summer. The genre im making is kinda electrostyled house but im still in the beginning of my "music career" so im just trying some stuff out. Anyway I just finnished a song the other day and would like some feedback, this song i made together with a pal, or we did the melody and all that stuff you do in the start together then i finnished it on my own. The feedback can be from anyone, not just people who does music themself.
Heres a link for the song so feel free to give feedback.
-> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero/lenny-mike-adamo-original-mix <-
Note: I allready now some things that im not happy with and would change but im not sure if I feel to remake the song since I started on new songs.
And heres a link for my soundcloud account -> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero <- so if there is anyone else here on crossfire that makes music we could follow each other's work.
Heres a link for the song so feel free to give feedback.
-> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero/lenny-mike-adamo-original-mix <-
Note: I allready now some things that im not happy with and would change but im not sure if I feel to remake the song since I started on new songs.
And heres a link for my soundcloud account -> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero <- so if there is anyone else here on crossfire that makes music we could follow each other's work.
Lycka till!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H6_N1Ncki8U
I'll follow you!
if u want , I can play it in my club for a try :)
- Simple melody (almost like punkrock, maybe 3 notes max on the whole song?)
- Not enough bass
- Annoying pauses
- Synth sound
- Way too much reverb
- Same beat for the whole song
- Sound & melody in the outro, sounds like farting and not in a good way
Very hard to give any plus points really. Some tips though: Use snare with your beats. The beat would already sound a lot better if it had some snare in it at some point. Also look around for cleaner synth sounds as the current ones you used sound pretty horrible. Some tuning with all the sounds you used in general would do you good.
If you need tips, feedback, listen to some of my projects, or make some project together with me let me know ;-)
About your music, its quite decent... altough i feel a bit too much of Avicii's influences and the beat could be more worked, on the synths u should add on it a lower octave, and its missing some bass. Besides that i enjoyed ;) work a bit more on this project coz it has potential ;-)
Cheers
I´ll see if i will remake this track, I want to change a lot of things so we will see if I want to do that or if I just go with a other track.
Link me some of your songs and I will listen :)
thanks for the input.
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http://is.gd/E079Gm - 010101 - SRB.mix ! [waste-land]
Werrrrrrrd*