House music (Making it)

Hey crossfire, sup? Anyway I started making music this summer. The genre im making is kinda electrostyled house but im still in the beginning of my "music career" so im just trying some stuff out. Anyway I just finnished a song the other day and would like some feedback, this song i made together with a pal, or we did the melody and all that stuff you do in the start together then i finnished it on my own. The feedback can be from anyone, not just people who does music themself.

Heres a link for the song so feel free to give feedback.
-> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero/lenny-mike-adamo-original-mix <-

Note: I allready now some things that im not happy with and would change but im not sure if I feel to remake the song since I started on new songs.

And heres a link for my soundcloud account -> http://soundcloud.com/mikedegero <- so if there is anyone else here on crossfire that makes music we could follow each other's work.

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Is that what they call House music in Sweden?
;) Wanted to make a song with a nice atmosphere and feeling in it, but I will go for some harder stuff aswell. Just testing some stuff out.
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I wasnt trying to be clever or anything - that was actually a serious question :) I mean this is just a housy to me as swedish house mafia which cant be put in the house genre apart from in Sweden apparantly ;p
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maybe house=home @sweden xd
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Well house is a wide genre and theres a lot of diffirent styles. But I may agree that it´s not house house if u know what I mean :P
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pretty nice. tho that girl screaming some weird shit in the middle of the track is... well weird. but i like it. keep it up and good luck
Okey, thank you :)
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www.soundcloud.com/sdurri (that's me)

I'll follow you!
I like the melody, Drums should be more punchy though! and missing some treble and subbass?
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Thanks, okey, well I didn´t use it in this song :) I´ll follow u aswell.
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Its not so bad, but those vocals need some sort of compression and reverb - but maybe that's because I like deephouse more... Subscribed (Via BasslinersXS).
Okey thanks :)
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ME HOUSTA
I like it :)
if u want , I can play it in my club for a try :)
Thanks, Go ahead if you want :)
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- Slow start
- Simple melody (almost like punkrock, maybe 3 notes max on the whole song?)
- Not enough bass
- Annoying pauses
- Synth sound
- Way too much reverb
- Same beat for the whole song
- Sound & melody in the outro, sounds like farting and not in a good way

Very hard to give any plus points really. Some tips though: Use snare with your beats. The beat would already sound a lot better if it had some snare in it at some point. Also look around for cleaner synth sounds as the current ones you used sound pretty horrible. Some tuning with all the sounds you used in general would do you good.
Okey thanks for the input :)
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Hi, i am a music producer also since 2008.
If you need tips, feedback, listen to some of my projects, or make some project together with me let me know ;-)
About your music, its quite decent... altough i feel a bit too much of Avicii's influences and the beat could be more worked, on the synths u should add on it a lower octave, and its missing some bass. Besides that i enjoyed ;) work a bit more on this project coz it has potential ;-)
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Well I know that I can change a lot by now. Cause I learned a thing or two. I didn´t work much with EQing or atleast I didn´t do it in the right way, I also didnt use any kind of sub basses, nor did I put in the snares for a better beat. I took all that in mind and started studiying it a bit more, and I feel that I know all that better now.

I´ll see if i will remake this track, I want to change a lot of things so we will see if I want to do that or if I just go with a other track.

Link me some of your songs and I will listen :)

thanks for the input.
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http://is.gd/DLcG15 - Reason 5 rehearsal :: #1
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http://is.gd/E079Gm - 010101 - SRB.mix ! [waste-land]


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