New song!

by ReignofWarSpree • 18 Jul 2014, 15:03 • Journals
Made a new ambient song, would appreciate feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/brokenbassnl/orbital-harvest

Oh yeah, hi there, been a while! Is Crossfire still active?
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Superboyy 18 Jul 2014, 16:44
Nice track. I see it as a background track for a profile video of a company that makes green tea or hot sauce.
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ReignofWarSpree 18 Jul 2014, 17:24
Thanks! Had old medieval RTS games in mind while making this, but I guess an ad will suffice too (although I think it's a bit dramatic for that hehe :P)
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dnl 18 Jul 2014, 17:52
sounds like a 5 years old got himself a guitar from daddys closet
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ReignofWarSpree 18 Jul 2014, 17:54
Wow, he must be a natural then :D

But if you're not trolling, I assume you're saying the guitar sound doesn't sound realistic enough?
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Wrath 18 Jul 2014, 17:58
Pretty good!
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BOBiKA 18 Jul 2014, 18:23
Sounds pretty good for a commercial about better life/places to live where life is better :D
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HellHammer 18 Jul 2014, 22:32
7/10, definitely good. Maybe add a little more variance to the guitar at the end so that it doesn't repeat the same tone as it does in previous parts of the track? Maybe it would break its balance. Donno what I would change really.

Didn't care much for the house track though, sounded very generic.
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ReignofWarSpree 19 Jul 2014, 01:39
Cheers! I actually felt the same about the guitar but couldn't really find a solution. I'll try adding in a new melody or changing it up a good bit in the last part.
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vj7o 20 Jul 2014, 18:04
i liked it.
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