how to make a good journal?

I made a small tutorial for newbies. Every good journal should have at least 3 parts and include some of those elements

Part I A (question)
Hi guys i'm looking for a good rock radio could u give me a link?

Part I B (some ET prob)
Hi guys my friend's got a problem. Every time he joins a server pb kicks him. What shall he do now???

Part I C (football)
Hi guys F.C. Nairobi - Yokohama United 0-2! :<

Part I D (ET demos)
Hi guys i'm looking for some mystic's demos. Could u give me a link?????????

Part I E (Fragmovie music)
Hi guys can u give me name of the songs from mAx new movie?

Part I F (ET is dead)
Hi guys i turned on my ASE at 3:30 AM and most of the servers were empty! ET is dead fo sho!

Part I G (cheaters)
Hi guys i spotted a cheater!!! yawn link -> http://yawn.be/findPlayer.yawn?nick=cheater&pbGuid=&etproGuid=&gamecode=ET

Part I H (birthday)
hb|Queen Elisabeth!!!

Part II A (random pic)
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/9525/1112669mo5.jpg

Part II B (random video)
http://www.smog.pl/wideo/3335/darth_vader_kontra_japonska_policja/

Part II C (random flags)

Part III A
Greets, me

Part III B
Discuss.

And some comments u can use now:
-old!
-ban!
-#care
-nice english

btw u could anwser me with this radio :P