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frEeze - Teleportation
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12 Sep 2010, 11:49
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Directed and Edited by:
Kamil 'SPAKI' Spaczynski ( Poland )
[email protected]
#wrapped-productions @ irc.quakenet.org
Starring:
frEeze ( Estonia )
//Soundtracks:
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#Intro:
Fahrenheit
by Immediate Music
#1st:
The Only
by Static X
#2nd:
Inside The Fire
by Disturbed
#3rd:
Attack
by 30 Seconds To Mars
//Programs Used:
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#Wolfenstein: Enemy Territory 2.60b
#Image-ET
#Huffyuv v2.1.1
#Avisynth_258
#VirtualDub-1.8.4
#Adobe After Effects CS3
#Adobe After Effects CS4
#Adobe Photoshop CS3
#Sony Vegas PRO 8.0a
#Smireboule Camtrace3D
#MeGUI 0.2.5.1046
//Info:
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Overall Length: 00:06:59:29
Weight: 417mb
Bitrate: 7000 for HQ (MKV)
//Special thanks:
Requemm
Kamil 'SPAKI' Spaczynski ( Poland )
[email protected]
#wrapped-productions @ irc.quakenet.org
Starring:
frEeze ( Estonia )
//Soundtracks:
|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_||_|_|
#Intro:
Fahrenheit
by Immediate Music
#1st:
The Only
by Static X
#2nd:
Inside The Fire
by Disturbed
#3rd:
Attack
by 30 Seconds To Mars
//Programs Used:
|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_||_|_|
#Wolfenstein: Enemy Territory 2.60b
#Image-ET
#Huffyuv v2.1.1
#Avisynth_258
#VirtualDub-1.8.4
#Adobe After Effects CS3
#Adobe After Effects CS4
#Adobe Photoshop CS3
#Sony Vegas PRO 8.0a
#Smireboule Camtrace3D
#MeGUI 0.2.5.1046
//Info:
|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_||_|_|
Overall Length: 00:06:59:29
Weight: 417mb
Bitrate: 7000 for HQ (MKV)
//Special thanks:
Requemm
Nice highsens-aiming =]
By the way, I love his "granades"! :XD
some frags were nice, others not,
sometimes its hard to see who he killed, bad dof settings maybe?
thats my only objection... overall good movie
sound - I dont like when there are mixed scenes with gamesounds and without them, use them everywhere/nowhere, make 2 sound tracks for example. On the other hand, I didnt catch any missynced sounds so thats a plus
general look - well, I dont think dof fits well in 1st person view, also blurred corners are not so nice when they are blurring popups. Anyway, it was watchable and quality was above decent I would say
fragz - nothing to say here, nice, fast, laggy, thats freeze :))
@5:13 - i was waiting whole movie to see me being fragged, and when it comes there is a fail with popups/center messages :((
@4:30 - syncing pistol to the rhytm of song is nice idea, but the way u did, it was just weird
@2:23 - in popups, it is supposed to be grenade not granade :) (E: actually, its everywhere, not just in this one action)
inappropriate dof
blurred out popups
rest ok
some nice cameras, transitions and editing moments
but not consistent
was a movie, as usual, i really enjoyed watching <3
nothing is more epic and sensual than
ghost in the shell - inner universe
It's practically perfect as for the technical side - the quality is ideal, and so are colors and DOF/Motion Blur. The only thing that kept me away from giving you 10/10 in that matter is the slow motion. It felt choppy. You should've recorded with more FPS for sure. Also the fact that you took this effort and do your own custom popups/hitsounds is remarkable. But one thing - why the hell do you want to do the popups just to change the font? I mean, if I were you, I would SHOW the viewers that they are made by hand. For example, I'd change 'was killed' to 'was lagged' or sth like this. I'm just saying that you could have achieved the same thing with UVMoviemaker.
The intro was too plain. It needed some variation, some nice twitch or optical flares, or maybe some slight texture that would build the atmosphere, some Action Essentials maybe. The animation was nice, but the thing is the intro has to be INTERESTING! You did nothing to make it so, apart from the simple animation! Work on it a little bit more next time. Also, I'll give you some tips on how to remove the banding from your movies (they were really visible on the intro's background):
-Put a very little grain on the whole intro (or the BG only)
-Change the projects' color settings to 16/32bpc
-Use 4-color gradient with the very similar colors instead the normal 2 color gradient
As for the editing side. The flow was nice, you didn't overuse Twitch which is pretty hard (check my movies if you don't know what I mean : )). The slow-mo was kinda bugged but that's for the technical part, what I wanted to say is that you should GET RID OF these Windows Movie Maker-looking transitions, like, for example, layer rotation. It was really hurting me because these little things are taking the movie level down. I know that you tried to make the transitions differ from each other, but don't use these goddamn transitions. They just look bad and noobish.
I liked the cams alot. Apart from like 2 of them they were all really great and adrenaline rushing. Don't listen to drj3w. I see you were trying to kind of imitate Max' style, and that's not bad at all. To be honest, I'm full of jelaousy because you managed to imitate believably enough : ) Congratz
Overall, it would be one of the best ET movies so far if you avoided some silly, little mistakes which make the big difference (Noobish transitions, popups bug, and so on). If you put a little, little bit more of an effort to this movie you would get a masterpiece. It really needed a little bit of rotoscoping or motion tracking and some more particular effects that you would be able to define as the ones you've done on your own. Without these things you have a very good movie which is propably not going to be remembered for a long time. But I wish you the best.
9-/10
+ quality / colors
-horrible ingame sound quality
-blurred popups? why?
-expected a lot more fragwise too.
-lame music
but im not going to download it
spaki, next time please use better frags and the edit sucked as hell..
OT. freeze backstabber :DDD
Blurred popups was annoying, why would you implement that I do not know and should of been a better outro than just cutting off.
+ some frags
+ quality
+ colors
- music (overused)
- granades :P
7/10
ftp mirror: http://z4j3.biz/et/frEeze-Teleportation.rar
music is really bad
frags good but shoutcast for 1 kill is shit
to sum-up its not bad ! :D
5/10 or 6/10 due to shit music :(
you are crouching like a shit fuck
so now serious.. music wasnt the the best, some frags were rly nice, but tbh i expected more "high quality" frags from u :/ quality was decent, popups were fucked up imo
still one of the better movies :)
- 2 much blur
- too much slowmotion shit with nades / pf
- grana..........