My new electro track is ready

ear cancer :s

made me sleepy

rough around the edges
feels more like a trance song put over a electro bassline, the melodies are cool but rough as i said. try a progressive beat which imo works better with melodies than the electro noise.

the beginning isnt nice ( not clear sound ) -> dont like the first seconds.
later the bassline is quite good, but it sounds like amateurmusic..make it more special.
voicepart is well done

all in all not bad but it gets boring after some minutes :y

try to make it more special with clear parts and nice transitions and stuff........(ka heb den bass an manchen stellen mehr heraus. bzw fang langsam an und ziele auf nen höhepunkt)

Like m1ke said, its rough even tho I like the beat, just those "switches" between right and left at the beginning are wierd

Stop it, stop destroying music.

it's not rly my cup of tea that dance shit, but I have to admit like once it made me tap my feet... :D
next time you should make it longer though, 10 minutes is too short for any song.

who is the voice btw?

<3 cf

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more like trance, but it aint bad

ur favourite part is also my favourite :) like the distorted synths, decent melodie. the vocal is quite annoying but fits the whole pretty good.
though 11 min is way too long. i`d shorten the first part and give more drive to the bassline.

this is not electro -.-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXRjHx7R5XQ

using sidechain?

I like