I assume you are trying to create open cuts; but they seem to me like a spatter of blood. The blood on the left side of the nose doesn't "curve" with the nose itself - so it seems a bit unrealistic.
the text isn't quite visible - unless that's your goal.
Can't really help out on this stuff, don't really edit stuff like this :PPP
Will try myself soon see what it's like. Just seems the blood is an overlay and not 'on' the skin like its intended to, try diff blend modes + opacity and curve various bits to go with the facial structure \o/
this is like 3 tutorial mixed together (my first time). The swirls are just there to make ot more complex didnt want to leave just pure white -.- Maybe some blood splatter would be better?
the flesh underneath your skin doesnt look like a lavastream you know, he's dressed up like he's planning on hitting on some classy girls at uni rather than being evil, the background doesnt match the purpose and theres no anti-aliasing on it, font isnt suited and you should touchup the eyes (colour) to make it look evil :)
Atm i cant make it better. Still need to learn more
the text isn't quite visible - unless that's your goal.
but i like the missing tissue part :p
The hat annoyed me because there's no detail in it :(
Not sure what the swirls in the background supposed to represent though :X
Will try myself soon see what it's like. Just seems the blood is an overlay and not 'on' the skin like its intended to, try diff blend modes + opacity and curve various bits to go with the facial structure \o/
increase overall contrast, substract a bit of blue, darken dem all
pm me the result (at least of the color correction)
edit:
suppose it would look better if those flying thingies were red and background was black, with some greyish flare behind the person