LHB - Zanzibar

Hi all,

I'm a new french house music compositor.
My english is not good, that's why i will not speak a lot.

I just want to present my new track "LHB-Zanzibar"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KaXZhKsirD8

Thanks for your comments.
(All critics are welcome)
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Sry, but even our random "polish fruityloops guy" makes better songs :(
Nerd is mad. If random guy makes better songs, do it and show me.
You listen Trance Music, I understand if you don't like House Music.
Your comment is useless.
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I like house, trance, electro, dnb, rock and much more and i have some knowledge about making music. I dont call my self professional and i dont even want to do so, but i understand so much, that i can tell you, that you have just added some random beats on fruity loops and added one random acapellatune. Thats nothing impressive! Its the first step, yes..but you also asked me for my opinion and i think that it really sounds cheap. It sounds like someone is smashing on some tom toms in africa while beeing on drugs. Your sounds are to "clear". I mean you arnt using any fading-out-effects. If you cant live with my opinion then it is your problem, then dont post anything here on crossfire. I bet many people will even comment in a worse way.
Parent
Can you advise me about color sounds plug-in?
PS: I didn't say I'm professional too, I compose for 1 year ago and I want to improve myself.
Parent
Im working with an old program called "cool edit pro 2.1". There you can add as many effects as you wish. If you want to know how it works, just search for some youtubetutorials. There are millions of good tutorials ;)
Parent
thanks man!
Parent
what a good track, continue

deal done :D
0:36 is where the song got shit.
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