STS-135 Atlantis

by DemHerbs • 9 Aug 2011, 16:05 • Journals
Made an attempt at my first progressive house track. I'm really satisfied with the outcome, but I'm also willing for criticism cuz I'd really like to improve on this genre.

STS-135 Atlantis

enjoy

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Levin 9 Aug 2011, 17:07
earcancer
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DemHerbs 9 Aug 2011, 17:13
thanks for the helpful criticism, now look at the top right of your screen. There is a log-out button. Please press and never return...
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Burneddi 9 Aug 2011, 17:44
I'm not saying it's bad, it's just... kinda boring. Like progressive music always is.
Maybe if it was like half that length..

E: Still listened through it, and kinda liked it. Just a tad too long, is all.
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EnderWiggin 9 Aug 2011, 18:53
Pretty enjoyable to listen. I do think it's a bit to long since it contains so little variation and the 'main melody' is really slow. Makes it appear to be something to play in the background rather than something to really listen to.

I also felt the intro was a bit off-sync. Especially at the part where the beat kicks in.
Perhaps you should focus on making shorter tracks just to get the feeling because the track seems a tad boring to me overall.

Also, the three little tunes from 0.10-0.13 sound very unprofessional and seem to not fit into the track.
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TrgT 9 Aug 2011, 18:58
to long.
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