New track, have fun

by Paper • 28 Nov 2011, 00:23 • Journals
Just a simple song I had to make for my software class.

Programs used:
Logic Pro 9
Propellerheads Reason 5
Waves

Opinions / constructive criticism / flame always welcome

http://soundcloud.com/juanjosecardenas/911-11
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dinev 28 Nov 2011, 00:28
your music is worse than hitler
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RASHOMON 28 Nov 2011, 00:29
izi Godwin
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dinev 28 Nov 2011, 01:03
i just did what was unpreventable anyway :(
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rsp 28 Nov 2011, 00:35
No offense but I think my ears are bleeding.
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 00:39
None taken, opinions always welcome.
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syriusz 28 Nov 2011, 00:40
your music is worse than stalin
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ipod 28 Nov 2011, 00:47
your music is worse than casek
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Stonerrrr 28 Nov 2011, 01:27
real paper?
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JamPanda 28 Nov 2011, 01:55
damn man, it's really bad =(
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Niki0o 28 Nov 2011, 06:06
Sounds a bit like a porn movie music.

Dunno
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Cardo 28 Nov 2011, 10:34
practice more
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 15:41
Says the guy who couldn't figure out how to make a stereo mix on shitty FL studio?
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Cardo 28 Nov 2011, 15:44
stereo mix? polyphony was bugged.
your "songs" sounds like it hasnt been mixed + preset sounds i recognize.
In all it is pretty bad.
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 17:09
Lol is that so?
For a guy who uses Fruit Loops Studio that's a lot of trash talk mate!
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Cardo 28 Nov 2011, 17:18
aah fucking parrot, "fl studio is shit " , talking what you heard.

its funny man, childs like you make me laugh
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 17:20
Come at me brah, show me what you have done!
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Cardo 28 Nov 2011, 17:32
even if my shit is good youll say its shit

rest your case
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 17:37
Tell you what, I'll go to uni to do some stuff, but when I come back I'll upload the stuff that I have really worked on (at least more than 30 mins, not like this). Then we'll talk.
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Cardo 28 Nov 2011, 17:48
sure, im not trying to diss you anyway. I listen to it and say what i think
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schNee 28 Nov 2011, 11:53
i like the first 10 seconds =)

go on
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Stonerrrr 28 Nov 2011, 17:31
shes a girl, listen to her
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Ronner 28 Nov 2011, 13:34
I hope you enjoy making these tracks and that you have no ambition other than purely seeing it as a hobby, because you do not really have a talent for it.
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Futimojo 28 Nov 2011, 14:00
How could u say he haz no talents after 1 track ...
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Ronner 29 Nov 2011, 09:09
Quite easily is how.
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 15:50
Although your opinion is highly appreciated, I beg to differ. I will not get into an argument with you though, but thanks.
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Ronner 29 Nov 2011, 09:08
No need for an argument indeed. You asked for opinions, criticism and flame when posting this. I gave you my share.
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Futimojo 28 Nov 2011, 13:59
from 4 to 10 others give me ear cancer
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ecnuob 28 Nov 2011, 15:16
backround beat is ok, the rest is just random shit
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aapje 28 Nov 2011, 15:33
kenkerlame muzikaa mii mattie, go for hiphop uhuu.
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Paper 28 Nov 2011, 15:42
Thanks for the opinions guys. Looking for some constructive criticism as well!
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Panda 28 Nov 2011, 17:26
Started off OK, the rest was ear cancer :(
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