Temple of Hope

Yoyoyo, I wrote a songtext for our new song, Temple of Hope, here it is (btw, if you think it's wrong grammar, it isn't, there is some old English in it too)!

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There in the battlefield
Lies the temple of hope
With it’s religious shield
For your average mope

Condemned by those who ought
To escape from descent
Into the valleys of
All that’s bad and is damned

The wastelands of the war
Defined by those who will pray
Our temple keeps you from
Falling into decay

Deception lies in there
That temple praising its filth
Suppression everywhere
By them the blood will be spilth

The fears inside your mind
Forgotten problems within
Your prayers to be refined
Suppress the sting of your sin

Don’t just live your life
Think of what you do
Actions hold consequence
Don’t let evil guide you

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Release the flaming!
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ps... comments like: Sux, Care, Omfg bananaphone - I'll just ignore. If you say something negative, plz say WHY it's negative...
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I have my care hat on

brb gotta puke
NOES YOU REACT ON MY USELESS FLAME :P
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:D:D;d;d;d;:D:d;d;D
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ITS ZEH APOCALYPSE


thats a nice song name btw:

ITS ZEH APOCALYPSE
OH NOES
ITS ZEH APOCALYPSE
LOOK HOW HE GOES
ITS ZEH APOCALYPSE
HE CRIES
ITS ZEH APOCALYPSE
INSECURE CAME WITH A KNIFE AND NOW HE DIES


uhuhauhauha!
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It was my intention to make you LOLOLOLOL


OBJECTIVE 1: SUCCEEDED
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why

ps... comments like: Sux, Care, Omfg bananaphone - I'll just ignore. If you say something negative, plz say WHY it's negative...

readu the post plz...
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Why you EVEN TRY to get mature critic in Crossfire? :D
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coz you izz meh homies
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Sux, Care, Omfg bananaphone
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bananaphone, Care, Omfg, Sux
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A POEM TO CROSSFIRE in 2 HAIKUZ LOLOL?

This community
- I hope you know
that - contains

mystic and mAus,
and their fanbois,
not more, that's all.
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Ass full of pork fat
Jiggles like a jello mold
Mouth is flapping too.
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Nice, ill make a song out of that
we already have the song ;)
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example

could be btw, i dno, we didnt bring out anything yet :>

edit: member for 1 day, gg
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Condemned by those who ought
To escape from descent
Into the valleys of
All that’s bad and is damned

the difference in length between sentences is too big there, but apart from that i like it. now add some music to it 8<
there already is music to it, and it fits perfectly with the music talking about lenght ;)
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Sux, Care, Omfg bananaphone
















j/k :D

nice song :) i like the lyrics!
power metal?
a combo of Classic/Film music, Goth metal, Death metal, and speed metal.

edit: kinda like epica :)
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death and power are things u cant put in one context :) it really sounds more like power metal at all lol
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yea, i'll upload an example of that style (that's not us though):

http://boomp3.com/m/2018d1764b78
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lol, i meant speed metal, was confused by your post^^
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if that was the case i'd lose my respect for him 8<
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omg battlefield lolol noob!

btw I never like songtexts :*
doesent work soz
Lyrics are overrated
NOW LETS ALL CUT OUR WRISTS!
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