graphics

by xRio • 23 Jul 2007, 01:24 • Journals
hey!
i tried something new, with a lot of layers this time. call of duty theme, 596x131.

TRY 1
image: TRY1

what do you think?

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what do you think of this one:

TRY 2
image: TRY2
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Fasolka 23 Jul 2007, 02:25
i like it:)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:27
thx! =)
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Fasolka 23 Jul 2007, 02:30
nP Sweet:)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:42
Quote[02:20] <+Fasolka> good night :)

:o
sweet dreams! :P
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Avalanche 23 Jul 2007, 03:28
The COD one is really nice.
But the ET:QW isnt, it looks kind of empty in some way, so go with the same style as the COD one :)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 03:29
haha :P get different opinions from everyone. one likes cod, the other likes etqw ^^
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Nickk 23 Jul 2007, 02:31
i like! now one of ET
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Deactivated5512 23 Jul 2007, 02:32
nice job but I think it's a bit too crowded
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Sheep 23 Jul 2007, 04:50
like my underpants
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biqq 23 Jul 2007, 02:33
take another font, this one doesnt fit in. Lift the font 2px up, use a layer design for the font and maybe even a 1-2px white stroke with low opacity. rest is quite nice :)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:34
thanks for the advice :>
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godverdomme 23 Jul 2007, 02:35
i dont like the face in the middle, rest is very nice
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Digitalnick 23 Jul 2007, 02:36
I like the collours, but like kv said; to crowded :>
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foonr 23 Jul 2007, 02:37
very washy, no real subject. the 'f' in of is destroyed.

(because theres no point in saying zomg wow its amazing for the sake of it)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:39
agree on the washy thing but that's mostly the idea. i still have to practice with making some pictures stand out to form a subject so thats why there is none :P

thx for the constructing critics
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foonr 23 Jul 2007, 02:49
increase the opacity for 1 standout image, then change the blending mode to colour or linear burn, see how it turns out

e: the size and width of the text doesnt give you much space, try making it small and/or moving it around
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:51
i dont like using burns, its more the edges of the images that disturb me, thats why its so vague but its vague in a wrong way i guess...

already busy with my second try.
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Rhand 23 Jul 2007, 02:37
zomg wow amazing graphics xrio, you fuckin rule !!!!1!
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:40
-.-

and now your real opinion? would like to hear it...
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Rhand 23 Jul 2007, 02:46
I don't really like it. It's too vague, I really can't make anything out of it.
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:50
thx for giving your opinion! normally you don't seem to have much trouble with doing so...
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Rhand 23 Jul 2007, 02:56
Please don't flame.
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 02:59
im not flaming
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Rhand 23 Jul 2007, 03:10
I'm just saying, u know.
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^jESUS Old Acc 23 Jul 2007, 02:48
image: ssusuussg5
is better.
(c) mAZZiON
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REIJORETARDI 23 Jul 2007, 03:03
_too_ much of layers IMHO. Text is basic and the placement is boring. Pictures are blurry. unsharp mask or remove some blurry layers. anyhow keep on workin!
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 03:10
thx ill see what i can do to make them sharper :D
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REIJORETARDI 23 Jul 2007, 03:15
maybe it wasnt about sharpness, more something like blurry layer over the pics...

try 2 was better, but whats that horizontal line between text and machine on left? it would be better without that!

najs work anyhow
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 03:16
tried to make the red lights on the machine come back in the picture near the txt... didnt work out as i wanted but hey its just a try :P
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gerstensaft 23 Jul 2007, 03:29
i like the et:qw banner :>
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Sheep 23 Jul 2007, 04:58
stick to your usual stuff if im brutally honest, although the qw banner is actually quite decent
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hannes-` 23 Jul 2007, 06:27
dont like the font that much, but rest is sexy ofc!
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artlove 23 Jul 2007, 06:29
the cod one is ugly as hell but the QW is "ok"
sorry
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Deactivated7001 23 Jul 2007, 08:59
images look crappy
make it a bit darker, its to light, and those stars look cheap and ugly


;)
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xRio 23 Jul 2007, 14:35
menso du arsch xD

that made me laugh
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