Scape
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14 Nov 2007, 22:52
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Made this, but I'm kinda stuck and it still feels unfinished, so I'm asking u guys for ideas. Ps, I don't care about flaming n stuff, so if u think it sux it's fine with me, but don't post it here then (or at least say why :S), just know it isn't finished yet, it's WIP!
Please some good ideas 4 this 1 ;)
(click the pic, so it'll enlargen :))
Please some good ideas 4 this 1 ;)
(click the pic, so it'll enlargen :))
(ger) effekt mit dem räumlichen ist dir gut gelungen =) (/ger)
Left side (at the mountains) you have some room. Try to fill it up with something cause imo that is where something feels missing. Edit: You need a baloon on the left side.
btw picture does not enlargen
and btw, it's ice, and I actually did reflection, I just copied the mountain and smudged it over the ice, and then I added a glass-scatter effect (very small) and reduced it's opacity.
The birds would be nice idd, but I dno where to place 'em since they seem to kill the compo everywhere I put em ^^
tried to find a spot 4 the birds but i think your right.
atm you got just bs skills :DDDDDD (bullshit)
Maybe make the hills on the far side darker, they seem too light compared to your aquaduct...if that hill is supposed to be covered with trees anyway, cant tell :p. Add more detail to them, maybe a rockface amongst the trees too.
Change the clouds...add some depth to them, atm they look simply like you chose one size of "splatter" brush and wiped it over the sky.
I like the aquaduct ;)
Perhaps add a feature in the water, like a dock.
You're definitely getting better though
Do you use a graphics tablet btw?
About the "water", it's ice ^^ so no dock there :P
The aquaduct, I removed it from the final image, since I rly don't like it (nobody recognises it, + it killed the complete nature feeling), now I only have the nature left, wich looks way better imo :).
For the clouds I just used a soft round brush and a splatterbrush to smudge the edges, but I guess there isn't rly a way to add more depth to it, it's the rest of the tag that makes them look flat ;)
The hills on the far side are supposed to be light, since they represent the cold side of the frozen lake, those mountains have snow and ice on it, while on the other side there is a wild growth of plants and trees.
Thanks for the tips m8, and I'll certanly apply 'em in my feauture projects, but not in this 1, since I think I've been screwing around with this 1 for too long, and if I continue on this 1 now I might wreck it completely ^^