"Extra-Large clothing articles are enjoying an increase in popularity due to the growing sales of McDonald's and Domino's Pizza. At the same time, the amount of computer games sold by Virgin Megastores also soared by 63%, arguably demonstrating the unhealthy lifestyle of today's youth.
According to Colin Waine, chairman of the national obesity forum, the young people are aware of this and are concerned about obesity; unfortunately however, they are not concerned enough to alter their behaviour.
In refreshing the menu and hitting the 30-minute delivery deadline, Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive, can see the reasons behind their success. 'The consumers are becoming increasingly concerned about their finances, so they will probably prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which plans an £18 million advertising campaign, than to an expensive restaurant.'
Mr. Moore can't tell if this will change in the future, but he believes that the pricing strategy will help them to gain the favour of the consumer."
Extra-Large clothing articles are enjoying an increase in popularity due to the growing sales of McDonald's and Domino's Pizza. At the same time, Virgin megastore's gaming department saw a 63% rise in sales, arguably demonstrating the unhealthy lifestyle of today's youth.
According to Colin Waine, chairman of the national obesity forum, young people are aware of this and are concerned about obesity, but are unwilling or unable to change their behavior.
After refreshing the menu and hitting their 30-minute delivery deadline, Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive, is not suprised by the companies success: 'The consumers are becoming increasingly concerned about their finances, so they will probably prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which plans an £18 million advertising campaign, than to an expensive restaurant.'
Mr. Moore can't tell if this will change in the future, but he believes that the pricing strategy will help them to gain the favour of the consumer.
2nd line: what shows -> showing / demonstrating
3rd line: National Obesity Forum
the young people know this -> young people are aware of their unhealthy lifestyle and are...
behaviour
In refreshing (whole sentence) -> Refreshing the menu and keeping to the 30-min delivery deadline are the reasons for sucess according to Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive.
The consumers are also getting more and more concerned about their financial situation, so they will prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which is planning a £18 million marketing campaign, rather than to an expensive restaurant. Mr. Moore can't tell if trend will continue in the future, but he is confident that the lower prices will keep them in the favour of the customers.
first come me, then my e-me
According to Colin Waine, chairman of the national obesity forum, the young people are aware of this and are concerned about obesity; unfortunately however, they are not concerned enough to alter their behaviour.
In refreshing the menu and hitting the 30-minute delivery deadline, Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive, can see the reasons behind their success. 'The consumers are becoming increasingly concerned about their finances, so they will probably prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which plans an £18 million advertising campaign, than to an expensive restaurant.'
Mr. Moore can't tell if this will change in the future, but he believes that the pricing strategy will help them to gain the favour of the consumer."
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According to Colin Waine, chairman of the national obesity forum, young people are aware of this and are concerned about obesity, but are unwilling or unable to change their behavior.
After refreshing the menu and hitting their 30-minute delivery deadline, Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive, is not suprised by the companies success: 'The consumers are becoming increasingly concerned about their finances, so they will probably prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which plans an £18 million advertising campaign, than to an expensive restaurant.'
Mr. Moore can't tell if this will change in the future, but he believes that the pricing strategy will help them to gain the favour of the consumer.
Your move.
:o)
€ ah..didnt notice the a while reading it a 2nd time
3rd line: National Obesity Forum
the young people know this -> young people are aware of their unhealthy lifestyle and are...
behaviour
In refreshing (whole sentence) -> Refreshing the menu and keeping to the 30-min delivery deadline are the reasons for sucess according to Chris Moore, Domino's chief executive.
The consumers are also getting more and more concerned about their financial situation, so they will prefer going to Domino's Pizza, which is planning a £18 million marketing campaign, rather than to an expensive restaurant. Mr. Moore can't tell if trend will continue in the future, but he is confident that the lower prices will keep them in the favour of the customers.
you should probably work on that!