A descriptive paragraph
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29 Aug 2008, 02:39
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Good morning all you advance complex complicated hardvardish speaking english men!
I received a task which i am supposed to hand in in 6 and a half hour and it is to write a descriptive paragraph about a guy in my class. Thing is, that this paragraph should contain massively advanced grammar and spelling and vocabulary n all that shit (nothing un-understandable though!) and this is something which isn't in my league! Also it should start with a "topic sentence" which is, or so I understand, not a topic but the first sentence of the paragraph and it should sort of indicate or tell the reader what the paragraph's subject is. Something like: "Describing the a person's personality after knowing that someone for 2 minuites is hard, but i will try my best" But only not that sentence because the teacher used something like that as an example ! just the first sentence should tell the reader what the parahraph is about !
So, if any of you amazing english speakers (saw nellie and meez online!) would be kind enough to do this for me, I would be forever in debt ! (F)
EDIT: He's blonde and you could add that he wears nice clothes or something, just so that it looks as if I (you) know who I'm (you're) talking about!
Yours truly, sAs!
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I received a task which i am supposed to hand in in 6 and a half hour and it is to write a descriptive paragraph about a guy in my class. Thing is, that this paragraph should contain massively advanced grammar and spelling and vocabulary n all that shit (nothing un-understandable though!) and this is something which isn't in my league! Also it should start with a "topic sentence" which is, or so I understand, not a topic but the first sentence of the paragraph and it should sort of indicate or tell the reader what the paragraph's subject is. Something like: "Describing the a person's personality after knowing that someone for 2 minuites is hard, but i will try my best" But only not that sentence because the teacher used something like that as an example ! just the first sentence should tell the reader what the parahraph is about !
So, if any of you amazing english speakers (saw nellie and meez online!) would be kind enough to do this for me, I would be forever in debt ! (F)
EDIT: He's blonde and you could add that he wears nice clothes or something, just so that it looks as if I (you) know who I'm (you're) talking about!
Yours truly, sAs!
sol Viewing a journal 2m 06s - Show the community that you really care about us ! (F)
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