My First attempt!

by spiROZE • 27 Sep 2008, 18:10 • Journals
Hi guys,

I'm trying to make a song on my acoustic guitar. here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SleDtwk7DEs you can see with what I've already made up for 1 song! I have many other riffs etc wich I'll upload later...

Check it out and tell me what you think about it :) and what I maybe should do better. (no singing included luckily for you!!)

For the people that know something about guitars, it's a very cheap and sucky Stagg guitar 100€ :)

And yeah I recorded with a sucky video recorder :)


Grtz, spiROZE
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raSen 27 Sep 2008, 19:12
pretty much emo

from urbandictionary:

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1. Girls say they like "sensitive guys" (lie)
2. Guy finds out, so he listens to faggy emo music and dresses like a dork so chicks will see that he is sensitive and not afraid to express himself (lie). He dyes his hair black, wraps himself in a stupid looking scarf, develops an eating disorder, and rants about how "nobody understands".
3. Now an emo guy, he meets Emo chick and they start dating, talking about how their well-off suburban lifestyles are terrible and depressing (lie)
4. Emo guy is just too much of a pussy. His penis is too small, he's too depressed to bathe, and has more mood swings than emo chick, and he doesn't even have a menstrual cycle. Emo chick dumps him, saying "It's not you, it's me." (lie) as she drives off with Wayne, the school jock and captain of the football team.
5. Emo guy goes home and cries, proceeds to write a weak song and strum a single string on his acoustic guitar. Another emo chick sees how he is so in touch with his feelings, and the cycle continues.

This is the sad truth of the emo lifestyle/music, and now that I look at how pathetic it really is, maybe the emos DO have something to cry about!


e: besides that cliché it's kinda good for the "first attempt"
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spart 27 Sep 2008, 19:13
nice 1 mate (:
i can imagine it with vocals its nice :D
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drv4c 27 Sep 2008, 19:17
not bad i guess
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Jeti2 27 Sep 2008, 19:23
:D

bastian63 (5 months ago)
I have 2 words for you: fuck you

lol
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spiROZE 27 Sep 2008, 19:26
yeah :DD I commented on his video that it sucked and it really did :p and yeah he was pissed as you can see :)
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k1pa 27 Sep 2008, 19:27
you suck donkeyballs!
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rAUNCH 27 Sep 2008, 19:34
nize.. but u change the rhythm way way too much! and the *scratch* sound between the notes is too loud imo.
:)
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xeoxis 27 Sep 2008, 19:41
Pretty nice. I liked the part at 1:30. Beginning could be better but still pretty nice. For how long have you been playing?
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spiROZE 27 Sep 2008, 19:48
yeah that's also my favorite part :) 2years now
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sAs1 27 Sep 2008, 19:42
That strumming is well annoying!
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Rickk 27 Sep 2008, 19:49
Ey fuckin nice man ! :D 1:30 ownt echt hard :D
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Lover 27 Sep 2008, 19:52
sounds nice
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ETNiES 27 Sep 2008, 20:01
sounds good!
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Kristoffersson 27 Sep 2008, 20:04
If my ears were cocks they would cum right now.
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Krato 27 Sep 2008, 20:21
loved the second thingie :>
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Gabt 27 Sep 2008, 20:22
Stormeh is better.
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jetro 27 Sep 2008, 20:46
Waw, really worth posting it on youtube. I mean like, who doesn't like to see blurred hands playing on a shitty guitar.

Sounded ok though :p, GJ EMO
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spiROZE 27 Sep 2008, 21:28
there are a lot of people posting there own creations on youtube! :p but yeah I know the camera is fucked ;p I need to fix it because normally it's a good one :)
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raissa 27 Sep 2008, 21:16
4 me good =)
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Spirea 27 Sep 2008, 21:21
The start is kinda boring (repeating the 4 chords)... but when the variation starts it gets kinda nice imo

Dunno why the picture was that blurry, but u seem to have a nice mic because the sound itself was very clear :)

Make the intro more entertaining and u got the elements for a nice song
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spiROZE 27 Sep 2008, 21:35
yeah I'm gonna work on the intro, maybe play the chords with hitting each string apart :)
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dunno 27 Sep 2008, 22:28
Your strumming isn't bad, but there are plenty of ways to advance it, however I prefer fingerstyle play, after all that's what makes guitar a powerful instrument and delivers a song unlike pick play.
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Lazio 27 Sep 2008, 22:41
Oh, so ur the fucking idiot that has been playing in the building next to me :/
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