My second attempt!

by spiROZE • 28 Sep 2008, 17:00 • Journals
Hi guys,

yesterday I wrote a journal about a song that I'm working on with my acoustic guitar http://www.crossfire.nu/?x=journal&mode=item&id=67909 .. Today I uploaded another song that I'm working on. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a4af-C2axXc&feature=user Let me know what you think of it!

and yeah the camera is still fucked and sometimes the micro gives 'beeps'..

Grtz spiROZE

edit: next weekend I'll upload some more, gonna work this week on some more songs :)
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mOsq 28 Sep 2008, 18:01
sounds good :D
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jonas 28 Sep 2008, 18:05
you're good :)
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OfficerCohen 28 Sep 2008, 18:11
and im awsome :)
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mOsq 28 Sep 2008, 18:12
u are just laggy :D
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OfficerCohen 28 Sep 2008, 18:13
good movement :(
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mOsq 28 Sep 2008, 18:46
:D
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OfficerCohen 28 Sep 2008, 19:27
but my provider fixed my problem :D
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mOsq 28 Sep 2008, 19:28
ah cool then i want a rematch ;)
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OfficerCohen 28 Sep 2008, 19:31
you wont get it :D:D:D
but i will give you a nice song more few seconds :d
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Trevize 28 Sep 2008, 18:07
Its not an "I Will Follow You Into The Dark" but good enough for a 2nd song.
My little bro playing bass guitar and have a band, they made a pretty surprising EP,
what is still secret and will bash down Beatles from the throne.

ah btw... 2nd > 1st. ask foonr to sing for you.
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Pigscanfly 28 Sep 2008, 18:11
pf, it's kinda boring.
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vila 28 Sep 2008, 18:15
i like listening to your stuff :p
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perforator 28 Sep 2008, 18:15
Oh boy, guitar is the most boring solo instrument imo :l
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OfficerCohen 28 Sep 2008, 18:25
i rly love piano =)
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anzz 28 Sep 2008, 18:52
eeeh right...
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Trevize 28 Sep 2008, 19:34
well, once i agree. its not for solo.
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xeoxis 28 Sep 2008, 19:46
oplz

http://nl.youtube.com/watch?v=0jgrCKhxE1s
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perforator 28 Sep 2008, 20:01
You try to prove me wrong and give me a link to Dragonforce, oh jolly
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xeoxis 28 Sep 2008, 20:16
It haz good solo!
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Rewolf 28 Sep 2008, 20:26
Crossroads - Cream
Comfortably Numb - Pink Floyd
All Along the Watchtower - Jimi Hendrix
Eruption - Eddie van Halen
Free Bird - Lynyrd Skynyrd

better?
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Viax 28 Sep 2008, 21:46
good songs, but not because of the solo's :/
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Rewolf 28 Sep 2008, 23:55
Well, its just what is generally thought as good solo's. What do you reckon as good ones then?
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Viax 29 Sep 2008, 00:00
there are lots, but mainly metal. doubt you know them ;d
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Rewolf 29 Sep 2008, 00:02
I dont really like metal idd. Only new metal like Rage against the Machine, SOAD etc.
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Viax 29 Sep 2008, 00:38
well, they barely have any solo's, just great riffs. i prefer quick and technical ones which you'll normally find in melodic death metal ;d

bands like guns 'n roses have amazing solo's aswell
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anzz 29 Sep 2008, 02:57
OMFG ur really saying metal has good solo's WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH u made my day, thnx! lol pls hahahaha

first: solos in death metal are inspired by classic music
second: They aint that creative
third: Listing to some music from like jimi hendrix, then u will hear some good solo's instead of those crappy death metal solo's

pls grow up...
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Viax 29 Sep 2008, 11:02
please, nice turning my subjective opinion into a fact and trying to ridicule it. it's called an opinion for a reason, learn how discussions work rather than slinging insults really.

furthermore, i didn't say "death metal", i said "melodic death metal". if you don't know the difference, please don't even bother to comment. also, i never said jimi hendrix didn't have good solo's. he's an amazing guitarplayer, i simply don't like his music and therefore don't like his solo's. that's why i didn't use his name when replying to the question which ones I (<--- opinion, subjective?) think are good.

so please, if anyone should grow up, or learn to read for that matter, it really is you.
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chuckii 28 Sep 2008, 18:31
i like the first part but the chords are shitty imo
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pumu 28 Sep 2008, 18:39
when did u start playing?
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xcon 28 Sep 2008, 18:44
pretty good :)
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morfine 28 Sep 2008, 18:48
nice sound, but need some more variation
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k1pa 28 Sep 2008, 18:49
you still suck!
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zeKxa 28 Sep 2008, 18:49
not bad, need lyrics
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bullvox 28 Sep 2008, 18:52
sounds ok... but since i dont know shit about playing any instrument.... Idont rly know if its good or bad but it sounds ok.

Are you planning to start doing the vocals too?
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spiROZE 28 Sep 2008, 22:04
I never tried to really sing before :p so I dunno if I'm good at it or not..I've written some lyrics.. will try them out etc next weekend maybe :)
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bullvox 28 Sep 2008, 23:13
gl with it... u can pm me it if u dont want it to be shown public ;D
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jnz 28 Sep 2008, 19:11
not bad, here is a little mess around song i made on teh classical guitar, recorded on interwebz mic so sound is shit ;)
http://www.lightcast.cc/crossfire/soud.mp3
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anzz 28 Sep 2008, 22:32
sound nice :D
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spart 28 Sep 2008, 19:22
sounds nice :)
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Deactivated5212 28 Sep 2008, 19:37
I touched myself. image: smiley_herz
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Biitti 28 Sep 2008, 19:42
Nice :)


I have acoustic too, started 2 weeks ago and I still suck big time! :)
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spho 28 Sep 2008, 19:48
i dont know shit about instruments BUT I LIKE WHAT YOU DID
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mant 28 Sep 2008, 20:07
pretty nice!
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Spectre 28 Sep 2008, 20:16
kind of sudden changes in the melody, you should try singing now! maybe represent belgium @ Eurosong?
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chizz6l 28 Sep 2008, 21:08
i dont know anything about music but you fcking suck big time, go kill urself
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illumise 28 Sep 2008, 21:11
agree with the one above me =$
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Nugis 28 Sep 2008, 21:36
I liked it
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Viax 28 Sep 2008, 21:48
start was nice, got boring after
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