Need Englishmen to help me out ! <3

Hi folks,

I've got this assignment for school, I have to write an email to my teacher English with a good reason (made up) to switch from group (we get class in different groups).

This is what I got so far, prolly full of errors :p :

Dear Mrs. Roselle,

I was wondering if I could change from Group 5 to another Group. I’d like to change because of my busy training schedule. Football Trainings take place 4 times a week including Monday from 2 till 5 pm. My team, FC Standard, is a professional footballteam that plays in the First division. If I don’t go to the practice on Mondays there will be a big chance of dropping out of the team. Football really means a lot to me and I'd like to combine my studies and sports. So you would do me a great favour if you would let me switch groups.

Kind regards,

Frédéric Gobert.


This should be kinda formal, but I don't know the specific rules and I'd like to know if i started and ended well with Dear and Kind Regards.


TY very much!
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Looks fine to me.
looks good
of dropping out of the team -> that i'll be put out of the team. (better imo)
that i'll be put out of the team - > of me being dropped out of the team. (better)
Parent
What is english man?
Could be more formal, try this:

Dear Ms. Roselle,

I would like to know if it is possible for me to change to another group as a result of a schedule conflict I have. I play on a serious football team with the strict training regime which, unfortunately, clashes with the timetable for my group - group 5. If I were to miss any training it is likely that I would be dropped from the team, and ideally I would like to be able to combine both school and sport, and switching group would enable me to do so. Please let me know if this is possible, I look forward to your reply.

Yours, etc.

Frédéric Gobert.
wow that sounds good :) thx
one question: what do you mean with "Yours, etc." is it like: Yours sincerely, Frédéric Gobert?
Parent
It's the same as 'Yours sincerely' - it's for ending formal letters.
Parent
I think his teacher will realise straight away that he cheated :)
Parent
Could be more Irish, try this:


Story Rose,

Whats the story on chaging to another group as me heads wrecked. I play with St.Pats who train like bassturds, and its interuptin me shit

n1
I lol'd

Now that takes flush's funny comments to 1 :D

Why are you called Flushje not just Flush? Hmmmmmm
Parent
Dear Mrs. Roselle,

Footy > School, help a brother out

Safe
Yo Mrs. Roselle,

I was w0ndering if I cud change from Group 5 to another Group. I wanna change cuz of my fucking bizzy training schedule. Football Trainz take place 4 times a week including Monday from 2 till 5 pm. My homies from FC Standard, iz a high+ footballteam that pwns the First division. If I don’t go to the pracs on Mondays there will be a big shipment of fail. Football rly means a lot to me and I'd like to combine me studies and sportz. So you would do me an epic favour if you would let me switch groups.

Cya

Frédéric Gobert.
you forgot to add

"P.S. Mrs. Roselle, TITS/GTFO"
Parent
that won't make it any funnier
Parent
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