Some1 from UK...

by Flaaaashy • 9 Nov 2008, 18:36 • Journals
... help me with my homework! I wrote an argumentative text: 'Does a Just War exist'
It would be nice if you could check the text on grammaticals errors and structure.
Contact me on crossfire or #zero.e /q zeroE`Flashy
Thx in advance!
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potty 9 Nov 2008, 18:38
does a "just war" exist or does a war just exist?

Doesnt make much sence unless this joint has gone to my head :(
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Mayni 9 Nov 2008, 18:41
Just - Justified/fair.
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Deactivated5446 9 Nov 2008, 19:06
You are the one that doesn't make much sence, really.
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Henk 9 Nov 2008, 18:40
just say: No war can never be justified... done!! :D
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txcxL 9 Nov 2008, 20:35
liar :< 6on6 (low vs low) is more than fair :<
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im a tree 9 Nov 2008, 18:43
haha what a bullshit topic

would just hand that back with one word: No.
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Slasheh 9 Nov 2008, 18:47
if it means "is there such a thing as a just war ?"


then the answer is ye: lets say aliens started to invade and pwn us. id say thats "just" to go to war with em.

in humanity then in this day and age there shouldnt be a reason for war, so no :)
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Darren 9 Nov 2008, 19:04
i totally agree with you, we cant have little aliens walking around getting headshots on random ppl... WAR!
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Deactivated5446 9 Nov 2008, 19:07
It wouldn't be a just war in general, as the aliens would have no real reason to attack us in the first place.
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Rockskin 9 Nov 2008, 19:09
Mabye hunderds of them are dying because our C02 problems !
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Deactivated5446 9 Nov 2008, 19:13
If we speak of aliens being extraterrestrial, our CO2 problem wouldn't affect them as they would be, as their extraterrestrial nature implies, not inhabitant in our atmosphere, hence would not be affected by our pollution.
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Rockskin 9 Nov 2008, 20:07
Who says alien need to live outta space? Mabye are aliens little microscopic creatures who will be enlarged thanks to the C02 problems. Ever thought about that? did you?
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Deactivated5446 9 Nov 2008, 20:12
My argument was directed at the assumption that aliens are extraterrestrial as you wouldn't call earth-dwelling creatures "aliens" I suppose.
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Rockskin 9 Nov 2008, 20:23
Ants are aliens so i would
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Deactivated5446 9 Nov 2008, 20:28
In what way are they aliens :D
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Rockskin 9 Nov 2008, 20:49
Comeone dont ignore the facts mate, you already know in WHICH WAY THEY ARE ALIENS SO JUST ADMIT IT PAL
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Flaaaashy 9 Nov 2008, 19:00
Tbh I don't want information about it, I just want someone who wants to correct my text :o)
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RazZaH 9 Nov 2008, 19:23
yes it does....in ET

write about et
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1Viper 9 Nov 2008, 20:15
A war can be justified but not by all sides and then only on a rare occasion
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