Well, this is where the English student skill of being able to write page after page without actually saying anything comes in useful.
Or ask Azatej, I heard he wrote lio's:
Lio; the man, the legend, the GOD OF ET. He is an outstanding player that gives his heart to the team. You might think lio is just another rambo player that gets highest damage at some random CDC, but you'd find yourself in the wrong when you spec him and his almost equally skilled teammates on ETTV. Remember that win versus Poland? That was all lio, no one else could've though of such an ingenious plan as to run into the enemy spawn on fullspawn to retrieve the radar parts. Remember the name, remember his achievements, remember his playstyle. Where else are you to find such a clever young gent that is topped by noone in the ET scene. According to his team mate vila, also an amazing player, not even mAus can outclass lio. Lio is prone to write gaming history, all that stops him from doing so is the chance he might lose this EC to powerhouse SNB; individually less skilled, but as a team they have a chance to beat lio's team of which the name does not pop into my head at this very moment.
It does take alot of time; don't expect to finish it in one day. I had to do about 10 versions and finally finished it. Get a decent English teacher to go over it and your subject teacher of the course you are gonna study at university. Mine was pretty poor at first but after suggestions and help from teachers/friends/family its almost perfect. Sent my UCAS of last month and already got offers from City of London Uni and Queen Mary Uni :D
Well theres nothing really but as long as you don't start I with every sentence it's ok. So instead of "I have an ever-growing passion" say "As an individual I have an ever-growing passion" etc etc. This site really helped me out but don't copy because UCAS have this database which checks your statement for identical sentences. Loads of examples for nearly every subject.
Another thing try and send your UCAS of by this week because you will have a slight advantage as your application will be received alot earlier than others and the deadline (January)
Depends on what course your doing. If your doing a general course like business studies then talk about how awesome you are (sports / clubs / responsibilites / work).. if your doing a more specialist subject such as physiotherapy then try and communicate that your trully interested in the subject and find it motivating - even if you don't :D
problem solved
got invited for an interview :o
Or ask Azatej, I heard he wrote lio's:
Lio; the man, the legend, the GOD OF ET. He is an outstanding player that gives his heart to the team. You might think lio is just another rambo player that gets highest damage at some random CDC, but you'd find yourself in the wrong when you spec him and his almost equally skilled teammates on ETTV. Remember that win versus Poland? That was all lio, no one else could've though of such an ingenious plan as to run into the enemy spawn on fullspawn to retrieve the radar parts. Remember the name, remember his achievements, remember his playstyle. Where else are you to find such a clever young gent that is topped by noone in the ET scene. According to his team mate vila, also an amazing player, not even mAus can outclass lio. Lio is prone to write gaming history, all that stops him from doing so is the chance he might lose this EC to powerhouse SNB; individually less skilled, but as a team they have a chance to beat lio's team of which the name does not pop into my head at this very moment.
+1
what else can I use rather than saying "I" al the time :(
http://www.studential.com/personalstatements/default.asp
waiting on my reference to be written then mine's off =)
applied to york bristol nottingham aston and royal holloway for psychology
where you applying and what for? gl btw
i got some free time to help now if you want
aww thanks
im applying for web & mulitmedia :]
help would be great :]