Übersetzung2 plz (ger)

so, brauche jetzt eure hilfe... muss folgenden text übersetzen:

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Die Tage, in denen dichter Nebel durch Londons Stra?en zog, gehoren der Vergangenheit an. Die Behorden sind stolz auf ihren erfolgreichen Kampf gegen die schadlichen Gase, die im Jahre 1952 schatzungsweise 4000 und noch 10 Jahre 2800 Menschenleben forderten. 22 Jahre, nach dem das Parlament in einem Gesetz alle Kohleofen aus der Stadt und ihrer Umgebung verbannt und in einer kostspieligen Kampagne zum Verbrauch der umweltfreundlichen Energietrager wie Gas, Elektrizitat und Erdol aufgerufen hatte, sehen die Londoner weiter: im Durchschnitt betragt die Sichtweite in den Wintermonaten jetzt 6,4 Kilometer im Gegensatz zu den fruheren 2.2 Kilometern. Au?erdem kann man sich an der Themse nun uber 70 Prozent mehr Sonnenschein in der kalten Jahreszeit freuen.

Der Londoner Zoo meldet einen weiteren Erfolg: die Polarbaren klettern auf den Felsen des Regent-Geheges schon in fast genau so wei?em Fell wie ihre wilden Artgenossen in der Arktis; Pflanzen und Vogel sind ebenso zu neuem Leben erwacht. In dem weltberuhmten Hydepark sollen in diesem Jahre neue Eichen gepflanzt werden. Im Gefolge der industriellen Revolution im vergangenem Jahrhundert und der sie begleitenden Abgase hatte sich ihre Zahl auf ein Dutzend verringert.
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habe schon 2 varianten, weiss aber nicht welches ich nehmen soll.... brauche rat



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The days in which thick fog moved through the streets of London belong to the past. The authorities are proud of their successful fight against the injurious gases which demanded in 1952 approximately 4000 and another 10 years 2800 human lives. 22 years after the parliament had exiled all coal stoves from the town and the surrounding by law and had appealed in a costly campaign for the consumption of the non-polluting energy sources like gas, electricity and oil, the Londoners see more: on average the sight during the winter months is now 6.4 kilometres in contrast to earlier 2.2 kilometres. Moreover, one can be glad on the Thames now more than 70 percent more sunshine in the cold season.

The London zoo announces another success: the polar bears climb on the rock of the Regent's enclosure already in almost as white fur like their wild congeners in the Arctic; Plants and birds have awoken also to new life. In the world-famous Hydepark new oaks should be planted this year. In the suite of the industrial revolution last century and the exhaust gases accompanying it their number had decreased to a dozend.
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The days in which thick fog moved through the streets of London belong to the past. The authorities are proud of their successful fight against the injurious gases, because of which approximately 4000 people in 1952 and 2800 during the next 10 years died. 22 years after the parliament had banned all coal stoves from the city and the surrounding by law and had appealed in a costly campaign for the consumption of the non-polluting energy sources like gas, electricity and oil, the Londoners see more: the average sight during the winter months is now 6.4 kilometres in contrast to 2.2 kilometres before. Moreover, one can be glad on the Thames now more than 70 percent more sunshine in the cold season.

The London zoo announces another success: the polar bears climb on the rock of the Regent's enclosure already in almost as white fur like their wild congeners in the Arctic; Plants and birds have awoken to new life as well. In the world-famous Hydepark new oaks should be planted this year. In consequence of the industrial revolution last century and the exhaust gases accompanying it their number had decreased to a dozend.
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