My Fifth attempt! (on electric guitar)

by spiROZE • 15 Feb 2009, 11:24 • Journals
Hi guys, you've all been waiting on it so here it is! My fifth song I've made on my guitar :) !! Check it out and tell me what you think about it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRS-op21XVU It's made with just 1 guitar but some parts should be played but 2guitars but give it a listen and tell me what you think about it!

Grtz
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icarvs 15 Feb 2009, 11:28
Nice guitar dude :P. Tho I like it more in black and white
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snusman 15 Feb 2009, 11:28
that sir is awesome
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RazZaH 15 Feb 2009, 11:30
like that part around 2 min !

well done
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bOBBANmJAU 15 Feb 2009, 11:31
najs :E some mjaus on that and u got a full song!
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arked 15 Feb 2009, 11:35
well done
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wiruz 15 Feb 2009, 11:35
liked it very much
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Sigur 15 Feb 2009, 11:37
well done jimi
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dejx 15 Feb 2009, 11:38
not sugar free
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duumed 15 Feb 2009, 11:40
do not want
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b 15 Feb 2009, 11:45
Nice one!
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botti 15 Feb 2009, 11:53
crappy song but u play well enough
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dEzIrE 15 Feb 2009, 12:00
aksually well done
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-Max- 15 Feb 2009, 12:02
Use a clean sound for the start (maybe it's just the camera that distorts it a little). Some delay and chorus might sound nice for it too, apart from the section from 1:50 to 3:00 which I'm not big on. It doesn't flow very well, so it doesn't seem like it's part of the same song.
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Dark 15 Feb 2009, 14:17
I agree with it not flowing. It does sound like a collection of different songs, which I believe it actually is.
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uLtraaa 15 Feb 2009, 12:04
not bad, but pretty simple my friend :D
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Woodd 15 Feb 2009, 12:31
just cut your wrist and you are done.
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Artifexx 15 Feb 2009, 12:32
die eerste attempt ..
das wat van blink toch? :p
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zeKxa 15 Feb 2009, 13:32
not that bad :>
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blackboy 15 Feb 2009, 13:37
well played ;D
you could make some insane moves and its perfect :P
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INSTi 15 Feb 2009, 14:33
Quotenext time adjust the camera to shoot a little higher up. We don't like staring at your dick while you play your song.


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kevlar 15 Feb 2009, 15:46
talented indeed! :D
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w1Za 15 Feb 2009, 17:51
Not that bad, but boring and the distorted part... doesn't really fit at all.
try to work more with different strumming pattern and the apreggio pattern you're using is the most overused ever.
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