4 guitarsongs I'm working on

by spiROZE • 12 Dec 2009, 17:12 • Journals
Hi guys,

I've recorded 4 guitarsongs that I'm currently working on. It's in the genre of punkrock, pls give it a listen and let me know what you think about it :).



Grtz
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Sungi 12 Dec 2009, 17:18
It sounds a bit messy, hard to listen :o
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 17:19
what do you mean? that the 2guitars aren't always 100% correctly synced? or that I made a couple mistakes?
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Sungi 12 Dec 2009, 17:21
No just it feels like my ears overflood from the amount of pure guitar and the sharpness :p
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Nub 12 Dec 2009, 17:19
Punk is dead.
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monkeybusiness 12 Dec 2009, 17:22
4th the best
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 17:23
yeah I think the same :)
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ILikeTurtles 12 Dec 2009, 17:25
sounds blink'ish
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 17:26
hehe great :) blink rulez
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ILikeTurtles 12 Dec 2009, 17:22
no drums no win
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unblind 12 Dec 2009, 17:27
lol if you are going to multitrack one guitar at least adjust the tone or something so there is some difference in the sound :<
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 17:28
yeah atm I just change the volume of 1guitar and the other or put the 1guitar louder at the right side of your headphones etc.. I'll prolly do what you say next time when I record
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rAKJI 12 Dec 2009, 17:27
i liked the 4th :) good work
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hsTE 12 Dec 2009, 17:41
Song 1: takes a while to get into. Maybe cut down the size of the intro cus it gets a bit boring after a while.

Song 2: Decent riff but as unblind said try to change the the sounds of the guitars not just the vol.

Song 3: nice start but gets kind of repetitive.

Song 4: By far the best 1 of the 4. Nice riff and smoother transition from intro to main riff.

good work. keep it up! :P
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 17:43
thxs for nice comment :)
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Snorfiets 12 Dec 2009, 18:01
I can do Medium on Guitar Hero atm.
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hAIRLESSbEAR 12 Dec 2009, 18:13
1st song intro is just horrible in every way. Way too simple and long. Also your playing technique is quite bad, as I suspect from the sound of plectrum that you played the intro single notes only with down strokes. I guess it's the punk "way" to play everything, but it's just useless waste of energy.
I like 0:46-1:07. With some good drum fills it would sound great.

Overall you should use more palm mute when playing the rhythm guitar. Also then you wouldn't have to adjust the volumes of guitars, as the lead guitar would sound more clear. I also suggest you to download guitar pro 5 with RSE sounds, you can easily make almost realistic sounding drums with it. Here's one fast example how it should sound like http://g.imagehost.org/download/0121/jotaan (clip made 100% in guitar pro 5) recorded the clip with some vista shit, which lowered the quality a bit. Don't know why the guitar sounds like a fucking banjo...
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 18:30
thxs for your comment, but no I'm not someone who only plays downstrokes. I also hate guys who only do that, it's fucking retarded ;p but yeah somehow I just did that there cause it feeled better to play it there like that :)

maybe some toughts on the other songs =/?
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huumeantti 12 Dec 2009, 18:20
l2p up and down
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 18:32
why you tell me that? I played almost everything up and down
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huumeantti 12 Dec 2009, 18:43
i don't believe you.
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spiROZE 12 Dec 2009, 18:46
watch my other vids on youtube :/ like this cover: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6WoeejMRKw

jeez
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huumeantti 12 Dec 2009, 18:49
sorry, i can't see that good, i lost my glasses somewhere.
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Statti 12 Dec 2009, 20:21
First one could be a bit faster. Keep on rockin'
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tALi 13 Dec 2009, 12:31
guitar hero,hähä :-)
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