Story tiem? :>
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10 Jan 2010, 22:56
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Gotta write a story of our choice for a piece of english coursework..
Got this so far.
It was a typical school day. Monday morning, walking down my road looking at all t
other children that look like they are walking down death row. It was really cold
today, colder than usual. The ground was crisp underfoot, the air was piercingly
cold on your lungs, and you could tell that everyone would rather be dead than to
be walking to school this morning. Other than the harsh weather it seemed like a
fairly average day, people falling asleep in lessons as you do on a Monday morning,
but then the bell rang for break and suddenly there was life all around. Everyone
running to the door to be the first in the food que. I on the other was not so
rushed, so i decided to take a walk outside and let the waves of people subside
before i would get my share of the dirty, soggy, greasy food that was on offer.
When i managed to scramble through the hordes of small children i went to step
outside and then there was...well i dont know what it was. It was just a huge white
wall filling the doorway. I poked it to make sure it wasnt just a giant piece of pap
covering the exit. It wasnt. It was soft yet sturdy, cold and kind of, well, wet.
After pinching myself to ensure it wasnt just the fact it was a Monday morning an
i may of still been dreaming, i realised what it was. Stood before me was a wall of
snow. I couldnt help but blink a few times to check if what i was seeing was real.
ran over to the windows and drew back the curtains, and all i could see was white.
any ideas on how to expand on it? :p
Got this so far.
It was a typical school day. Monday morning, walking down my road looking at all t
other children that look like they are walking down death row. It was really cold
today, colder than usual. The ground was crisp underfoot, the air was piercingly
cold on your lungs, and you could tell that everyone would rather be dead than to
be walking to school this morning. Other than the harsh weather it seemed like a
fairly average day, people falling asleep in lessons as you do on a Monday morning,
but then the bell rang for break and suddenly there was life all around. Everyone
running to the door to be the first in the food que. I on the other was not so
rushed, so i decided to take a walk outside and let the waves of people subside
before i would get my share of the dirty, soggy, greasy food that was on offer.
When i managed to scramble through the hordes of small children i went to step
outside and then there was...well i dont know what it was. It was just a huge white
wall filling the doorway. I poked it to make sure it wasnt just a giant piece of pap
covering the exit. It wasnt. It was soft yet sturdy, cold and kind of, well, wet.
After pinching myself to ensure it wasnt just the fact it was a Monday morning an
i may of still been dreaming, i realised what it was. Stood before me was a wall of
snow. I couldnt help but blink a few times to check if what i was seeing was real.
ran over to the windows and drew back the curtains, and all i could see was white.
any ideas on how to expand on it? :p
wat
1 PIECE OF PAST TENSE AND UR WORLD FALLS APART :<
hmmm...else cool story bro :D
no idea for continuing this. how much you have to write?
useless n too strong repeating. :) (thought walking in a dead row might beat being dead)
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Started making trouble in my neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my mom got scared
She said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air'
I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she packed my suite case and send me on my way
She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket.
I put my walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'.
First class, yo this is bad
Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass.
Is this what the people of Bel-Air living like?
Hmmmmm this might be alright.
But wait I hear they're prissy, wine all that
Is Bel-Air the type of place they send this cool cat?
I don't think so
I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air
Well, the plane landed and when I came out
There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out
I ain't trying to get arrested
I just got here
I sprang with the quickness like lightning, disappeared
I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said 'FRESH' and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say this cab is rare
But I thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air'
I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To settle my throne as the Prince of Bel Air
Sorry, but good luck!