Need some critique on a commercial

Made an commercial for Bruno Design UF Commercial.
Do you get what product its promoting?
YouTube crushed my contrast lvl's so its a bit dark.

Need some critique from normal viewers
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wKwa6cw4BgI

Edit: it was a 30 sec time limit so i allmost killed all my darlings in the editing.

2 Edit: I got no budget for music
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Socks, I guess?8DDDD
ROFL. That's got to be the worst advertisement I've ever seen.
ok thats really helping ^^
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socks

Indeed, too dark.
know but i dont know how to adjust it cuz i cant color correct it if i can only see the final result on youtube...
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If it's a .avi file you can correct it with virtualdub
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yeah i know how to color correct but in the editing room it looked totaly diffrent maybe its the monitor that not calibrated right.
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It's possible
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Oh man, not trolling but this aint too good man :P
its funny :) socks lover
blowjobs?
"back from the club" journals?
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