Photoshop CS4 results
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3 Apr 2010, 14:01
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what one is the best ? :D
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4866/39313421.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2363/strokepictures.jpg
Flame on thx ! <3
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4866/39313421.jpg
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2363/strokepictures.jpg
Flame on thx ! <3
so the text is much more clear and understandable on the second one
the space between the "t" and the "r" in StrokA is very small, while the space between "r" and "o" is WAY bigger. change the spacing for each letter so the text is better looking 'as a whole'.
2nd one is a no-no
1st one shows promise but the image is distorted in a way. Perhaps you resized it from a small size to a larger size? Or failed at jpg-packing. And the black text is unimaginary. Use some colour in it. The colors are otherwise O.K. Try to make the quality of the orange and purple lines higher & smoother. And use another slogan. Then you'll be fine.
oh and maybe this will make the tekst on the first better to read: make the reflection a bit more transparant
e: oh and make the mirror textlayer in the first one a bit more transperant. Might make it a bit more readable.
both shit but if I had to choose between the 2 it'd be the first...
the 2nd one looks almost like it was made with watercolor tissues. it's more creative and less like the typical "artistic" wnb. it actually looks downright artsy. on top of that it's more clean and crisp and looks less multidimensional. there's nothing too overpowering in the 2nd one and it just all fits together; the colors, the image, and the negative space. it's very appealing to the eye even if it isn't "cool"
Just forget about those comments because they don't add anything.. instead of being negative he could have said what he would have liked more.
Anyways, big-up for the other people for giving such positive comments =)
Ontopic:
Like i said to you on xfire:
In the 2nd one maybe a bit of red on the black makes it more eye catchy, but be carefull you don't put too much red on it, because it might not fit.
I agree on getting a other slogan.. but people should think your creative by the picture and not by the slogan so thats not the most important thing.
But the sloganz = lol regardless.
+ You have time to pull him down but don't have time to give him 'advice' ?
Just shut up in the future and we all be better off.
Cut the crap and get some respect and social skills. The world ain't about hate, its about love.
So if you based your name on that it should technically be crzonfire instead of crzisonfire!
and tbh alexisonfire are so awesome :)